Quin on G+ asked for some “action” to go down on Snow. Maybe a fight between Aaron and Hero. I’m not sure exactly how that was meant to be crammed into the story, or even how it would make the story more enjoyable. The fact is a monobrowed logan/wolverine lookalike got to deck Hero.
I may have a job at a big magazine you may have heard about. But I’ll find out tomorrow whether or not they’re stindgy.